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76 名前：名無し物書き＠推敲中？[] 投稿日：2005/05/11(水) 21:11:05
明日こそ餅食いてぇ。
俺はキリン。

77 名前：名無し物書き＠推敲中？[sage] 投稿日：2005/05/12(木) 10:41:43
>76
わずか一行で、主人公の主目的とタイムリミットを提示させる手腕に驚嘆。
さらに、二行目では主人公の意外な属性が明らかにさせる。

それほどにも待ちわびたキリンの長く暗い咽頭を、モチがゆっくりと落ちて
いく不思議な魅力に満ちた光景を想起させ、見事である。"

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